🍏 Apples of Youth
Lichard Tombson, a boy of youth,
Ate the apples, seeking truth.
He longed for beauty to never fade,
And so he ate, his dream was made.
His body now a skeleton's guise,
But oddly attractive to all eyes.
Forever young, he roams the land,
A lich, with power at his command.
The apples of youth, a tempting fruit,
But Lichard's choice, a lifetime pursuit.
For beauty's sake, he paid the price,
And now he lives forever in paradise.
What do you think? 😄
Thank you so much!! I think Lichard's legs were also skinny in other pictures but you gave me an idea I really like and I think him getting thick legs would be hot! Love things that are impossible irl :D
Thank you so much!! I'll make more soon, I think we need a tag for stomach vacuum :P
Shifty
For many days I always start to write comment then delete it as I dont know how to properly praise whole concept + this new look. Lichard is now very real and yet unreal at the same time. The waist shape is now really beautiful and more complex than before. "Waist-lace" great touch.
I tried thinking how to improve his look but ideas are rather bad. Still maybe they can be somehow improved so at risk of being weird.
1. What about piercings in the lower ribs? Or in the ribcage in general?
2. Do backview image focusing on Lichards skinny back/shoulders which still shows beauty and some strength.
I tried thinking how to improve his look but ideas are rather bad. Still maybe they can be somehow improved so at risk of being weird.
1. What about piercings in the lower ribs? Or in the ribcage in general?
2. Do backview image focusing on Lichards skinny back/shoulders which still shows beauty and some strength.
I appreciate your kind words, thank you! I'm glad you like the changes I made to Lichard's design, but you also might have noticed that I don't pay much attention to consistency in general, to me a character is a theme, not a person. Like, to me a Lichard is a skinny femboy with long white hair, I think it's called an archetype... ;D Like, when you think of Robin Hood, you think of an archetype, but when you think of Leonardo DiCaprio then you think of a person. Or if you think Marylin Monroe you get something in between because her style is so distinct that people can easily cosplay her ;P
Regarding your suggestions:
1. Piercings in the lower ribs could definitely add an interesting element to the character, might help emphasize his otherworldly nature.
2. A back view might be good, Lichard's arms and shoulders are quite muscled and I'll try to show that later.
Regarding your suggestions:
1. Piercings in the lower ribs could definitely add an interesting element to the character, might help emphasize his otherworldly nature.
2. A back view might be good, Lichard's arms and shoulders are quite muscled and I'll try to show that later.
TBJ
I really thought I'd left feedback on this... You're trying to get me to accept Lichard, I just know it. This has been some of your best lore building (including in the comments) that now I really want to read more. It's also not fair that you're doing your damnedest to make him beautiful.
Well, I think everyone deserves to see themselves in a positive light, even if they have their struggles ;D Anyway, I hope you enjoyed this piece! And who knows, maybe one day we'll get more stories about Lichard and his journey.
I remember one where he used to be quite a villain but then a couple of his new slaves talked him into taking a break and going around the world with them, so maybe it was on one of those days when he tried to enjoy some silly lifestyle away from his creepy castle ;D
I remember one where he used to be quite a villain but then a couple of his new slaves talked him into taking a break and going around the world with them, so maybe it was on one of those days when he tried to enjoy some silly lifestyle away from his creepy castle ;D
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